Jellysauce's Reviews

[The Bully]

talkin' bout love

stumbled upon this flash after i looked up "trampled under foot" to see if it was in any random animation, and so i hear i am. i was looking through a few of the reviews for this movie and you're getting a lot of unnecessary hate for this flash. i mean obviously there is room for improvement but to tell you to just give up on flash animation? pffft'. everyone starts somewhere.

personally what id like to see is a longer flash and a story line that isn't so incredibly simple. i think you could grow into a great flash artist if you keep at it.

[Charmander and Squirtle]

awesome.

i enjoyed this a lot. it was short, sweet, and to the point with some crude humor i think anyone can get behind. also i loved the throw back music you had in there. and your style. i can't even begin to describe, almost reminiscent of ren and stimpy, but you make it your own.

[Girlchan Contest!!]

im not very familiar with 'girlchan' but...

a review for this almost seems redundant because i know you didn't post this up to express anything artistically, but more as a way to inform people to enter your contest? so i really doubt me weighing out the pros and cons of this flash will do much for you.

i guess my only suggestion would be to add more animation than just a mouth flap moving up and down, and also personally i think the characters voices are insufferable.

Egoraptor responds:

There are jokes and writing in this production. Just because it promotes a contest doesn't mean that's all it is. Of course it didn't take as much time as something like Girlchan 3 but I'd like to think that people don't expect a smalltime internet animator to put out The Thief and the Cobbler every month.

[StarShine 2]

Excellent

I'm not a big fan of games on Newgrounds but ill admit I like this game a lot. I find it addicting and fun. I love the hint system, I just really like how you can risk taking a hint if you can't figure it out but it will cost you. This game also runs very smooth and its really easy on the eyes to look at.

But I think the thing that stands out the most about this wonderful game is that the music is beautiful. I mean id play this game on fun factor alone but the soundtrack is reason enough to play it a lot.

[Advanced Sprites Tutorial]

Perfect

In my eyes this is perfect. When I think tutorial I think a few things. First thing is that its easy to learn/understand, second you can go your own pace, third it has to be very detailed and informative to the target audience you are trying to teach, and finally it can't be boring so you don't lose the persons attention. In my personal opinion you guys did everything that needed to be done to make a great tutorial. All I can really say is excellent job and I hope you do more of these.

PaperBat responds:

Thanks for the review, and we hope to see some great flash from you :)

[RandomWare]

Fast

This game captures the fast and simple game play of warioware but I find the problem with this game is that its TO fast. You have zero time to think about whats happening in this game in my opinion and this game turns into failing the first time then coming back to it later and getting through it because starting over has give you time to think about what just happened. The music is excellent though.

Sgtpepper17 responds:

Yeah I also realized it was to fast for someone who hasn't played it before....
Music is mostly from a top 100 Classical Stuff. So for everyone who reads this, I'll proberly will giveyou more time :p

[Trial of the Mind]

i loved this

if i could i would add it to my favorites for the music selection but they dont have one ... just one for flashes... oh well

[The Rain Pt. 2]

good work

that was great to listen to i think its better then the orginal rain

[Free Step]

why is this not higher rated?

i thought this was amazing something you may hear in a quiet place or maybe in a sad emotion