Jellysauce's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Girlchan Contest!!]

im not very familiar with 'girlchan' but...

a review for this almost seems redundant because i know you didn't post this up to express anything artistically, but more as a way to inform people to enter your contest? so i really doubt me weighing out the pros and cons of this flash will do much for you.

i guess my only suggestion would be to add more animation than just a mouth flap moving up and down, and also personally i think the characters voices are insufferable.

Egoraptor responds:

There are jokes and writing in this production. Just because it promotes a contest doesn't mean that's all it is. Of course it didn't take as much time as something like Girlchan 3 but I'd like to think that people don't expect a smalltime internet animator to put out The Thief and the Cobbler every month.

[Phoenix Wrong-Clerks - 37]

Clerks

I was actually pleasantly surprised by this. When I first saw this I thought it was going to be really stupid and blam material, but I was completely wrong. First off you did a great job utilizing the Phoenix Wright sprites. I personally have never seen a flash that uses these sprites and I really liked it and think they should be used way more often than they do. Next you used the sprites emotions really well to further show the emotion the original Clerks tried to express with this conversation.

Anyway I really liked this and I hope to see more things like this from you in the future. Definitely keep it up!

EmSeeSquared responds:

wow, you've never seen an animation with Phoenix Wright sprites? hehe I'm kinda surprised, it's becoming quite a practice since the game came out. Most parodies like to use the name "Phoenix Wrong", which is what I used too, hehe. I've actually never played the game, and know little about it. In fact, here's what inspired me to make this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFldBV WFgWo

[Pleasure Island]

Great work!

When I clicked "Pleasure Island" I wasn't sure what id be in for. Looking back I'm glad I watched this. First thing that comes to mind as to what is great about this flash is the sound. The voices came in clear and were well acted. Next was the good art work to go along with very fluid animation. Pleasure Island also has an absurd story line that only a mother could love with some very silly moments thrown in there.

Basically I enjoyed this movie lol.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks a lot!

[Magus Bros Shorts 2]

good story

as my titles says it was a great story, the dialog was pretty good with a great relation ship between magus and mario, it was also a bit funny in there to with the flash back and some other text was ok. The animation was ok, it wasnt anything to rave about it seemed very simple nothing moved that much but it wasnt to bad of animation either, the sound wasnt bad but i wished for voice overs, but the text was easy to read and it stayed on screen just long enough to read it, and the ending was great also, over all it was pretty good.

ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

I'm glad I got the text speed right on this one. Voices I'm still not sure about adding as I've not seen many Mario flashes that have a good voice actor for Mario (then again I'm probably looking at the wrong ones).

I do agree that the animation was a bit simplistic in parts but oh well. The next one will probably see a proper intro anyway once I get ideas for it. Thanks for the comments.

[Yoshemon #15]

that was great

that was awsome and i really liked it, the sprites ran very smoothly and i thought it was funny when the character was asking questions to that lady, because most of the time when im playing pokemon i get lost and i try and ask people stuff to see if they help but they dont and they just say stupid crap, and the fight scene at the end wasnt what i would call exciting but it was fun to watch, any way i hope you make more some day

mjc0961 responds:

Thanks, but I won't be making more of these. Like you said yourself, the battle wasn't exciting, and this is a roadblock that I cannot overcome.

[Mortal Kombat Mishaps]

you suck at life, and making flash

that was terrible, and not funny at all. you suck

VicHD responds:

i'd like to see you do better.